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Cinnarry
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 22, 2006 3:19 pm    Post subject: Once Reply with quote

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Peggy Carpenter Harwood
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 22, 2006 8:46 pm    Post subject: Once Reply with quote

Hi Cinn,

Wow!!!! icon_lol.gif icon_lol.gif icon_lol.gif icon_lol.gif

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Cinnarry
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PostPosted: Wed Aug 23, 2006 12:26 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks Peggy! icon_biggrin.gif
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TygerTyger
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 24, 2006 11:55 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

She's beautiful! I feel like she staring right into me and she looks at the same time a little frightened and... mystery! There's something she's hiding... You do eyes soooo well!

Could you share with us the significance of the title?

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Cinnarry
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 24, 2006 12:28 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

her look is saying, "Just once", as in being hurt by a lover. Do you think something else would be more fitting? Thanks

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TygerTyger
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 24, 2006 12:49 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

NO! icon_eek.gif Only you can properly title your own work, mi Lady!

But the explanation did help solve the 'mystery'; a resolve to not be hurt again. How sad, indeed, is the story of women in a world gone astray, a world so far from what was intended... and so frustrating because satisfaction for her soul's desire always seems to slip from her grasp...
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Cinnarry
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 24, 2006 12:51 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Excellent! You hit the meaning right on the head!!

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