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Bloody Night (pt. 1) Lycan in Motion

 
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loufer
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PostPosted: Sat Jun 25, 2011 9:05 pm    Post subject: Bloody Night (pt. 1) Lycan in Motion Reply with quote

______________________Wild
_________________Blood _____Scent
____________________Awakens
_______________Dormant_____Longing
_______________Creature shifts within
___________Gibbous moon_____Night beckons
_____________Calling for the beast to feed
__________Softly, stealthy_____Sometimes reckless
_______________The lycan hunts tonight
___________Flocks scatter_____And men flee
________________Before his nightsong
_______________Helpless_____Hopeless
____________________As he stalks
___________________Their____Soft
_______________________Flesh


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loufer
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PostPosted: Sat Jun 25, 2011 9:08 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Honestly, I did try to color out the lines. Don't know why it didn't work....I spent ALOT of time trying to get the visuals right. Damn!
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