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Changeling's Charge

 
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loufer
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PostPosted: Sun Jun 26, 2011 2:14 am    Post subject: Changeling's Charge Reply with quote

(-I wrote this years ago, but dig it still...)

Simple, silent, slither soft,
O creature, o'er the earthstone moss'd-
Passions twisted, tortured, raw;
A victim of the Lovers' Law.

Simple, silent, slither soft,
O Darksome creature, freedom lost-
Misty-eyed, for smitten deep;
Seek out the shadows, there to weep.

Simple, silent, slither soft,
For lessons learned leave more untaught-
Enchanted hunter, stalk with care,
For Changed eyes glint, and hearts beware.

Simple, silent, slither soft,
Watching, waiting to accost-
O heart grown cold, with viscious claw,
Enforce ye now the Lovers' Law!
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