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jasonpugh
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 22, 2011 3:54 pm    Post subject: Forever Love Reply with quote

Can you be my forever love?
Thank god for your presence love
The bath you Iím your servant love
Bless every sunrise and sunset with you, love

Can you be
The reason I want to breathe
And the source of my joy
And sorrow when you leave

See itís more than just you and me
Its souls intertwined eternally
What God intended for man
And you're intended for me.

Please, let me be your comfort system
Iíll give you the attention that you need
Long day, well let me fix ya plate
Finish that then ill rub ya feet

See I put you before me
Let me see how you taste
Let me touch you, be still
Well you canít help your leg shakes

Let me buy you a place
Some where we can grow
A little girl with your face
You two would run the house I know

And from there weíll grow
Standing strong on faith
Living for each other under god
Overturning any problem we face

But before we go to deep
I take this knee
What you think
Can you spend forever with me?
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