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jasonpugh
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Location: Raleigh, N.C

PostPosted: Thu Mar 10, 2011 2:34 pm    Post subject: Can I Come Home Reply with quote

Lonely night

Itís another one of those
Secluded nights
Self aware, self evaluation
Inner fight
This dinner light
Reflects off that empty
Chair
No oneís there
And my minds elsewhere

*Should I call her?*

I tune into
The latest show
And I know
This is not going to complete
My need
For me
To be accompanied.

*Should I go over?*

Staring at my reflection
Wondering howíd it got here
How do I still fear
Love and all its appeal
Itís kind of surreal
That I for once don't want
A love, a complication
A situation to stress me
And drive me to neglect
My goals for hers
My soul for hers

*I pick up my phone*

At some point
I have to believe
That these situations
Relations arenít for me
Maybe itís more than she
Maybe the problem lies
Within me
Here we go
With my self destruction
Blaming myself
For lifeís lessons
And that's another
Side to this burden
With my faith I should know
That all of them had to go
To make way, to pave
The road for my queen
But itís taking too long

*She answers the phone*

*I tell her hello, you mind if I come home*

*She says yes*


I get dressed
I spray Cologne
I am pressed
To get "home"
Less to what I know
Loneliness had taken its toll
Tomorrow Iíll regret
What tonight's effort
Reveals my role
Tomorrow Iíll hate my goal
To be accompanied by
This nonequivalent


*I drive toward shame*

*I steer toward regret*

*This loneliness has taken toll*

*I crash at the point of contact*
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